Newlands creative writing competition

The school has a competition called, Newlands Creative Writing Wompetition, in which people that participate have to write a story based on three options they give us. This year we wrote it in theLanguage class with Andrea Schejter. The options were:
         1- Write a story which contains this: "I will never forget that day"
         2- How did he dare do that to me?
         3- We should be more concerned about the dangers of social networking.

Here I leave my story, I have chosen the first option.

There was a girl in my school, Jane, that was evil with everyone, nobody knew why and when she had turned like this, even teachers had respect for her. I remember that when we were young, my parents were friends of her parents¨ but they started focusing moré in their daughter's attitude so they lost contact. It all started after one summer when she started treating everyone as if all people had done something wrong to her.
   Today as every ordinary day I got up, brushed my teeth got dressed, had breakfast and went to school. It was a simple morning for everyone until 10 o' clock teachers started acting in a different way, like worried and warn, some students were curious about what it was that thing they were hidding, and some students said that we were talking nonsense, that nothing between them was weird. The phone we had in all our classrooms was ringing, it was only used for emergencies. Teachers received orders of not letting us continue with the day. We were in class locked for three hours, until they let us go to our houses. People were desperate and worried to know what was happening and some of them heard an ambulance, they told us that this girl, Jane, had committed suicide inside school, till then onwards I will never forget that day.