miércoles, 31 de agosto de 2016

Start all again

In literature class we discuss and analyse this term about three different poems, "The Clod and The Pebble", "Passion" and "Song". Our task is to write a new poem based in one of these poems. I choose "Song", that is about the opinion of a girl about love. Here I leave my work.

A feeling of craziness inside my body
a sense of being imprisoned, where
 there is no escape.

Crying without telling a word about
people thinking that I'm love.
My siblings guess
 that I'm getting away from
him like a butterfly
 that is going to find her way.

They don't know of my life;
get into shades and nobody can
know about them.

Some day they will all find out
but for now I can live with that.


                                                       




1 comentario:

  1. You´ve written a very powerful poem. The reader guesses there must be something that is not right, since the lyrical I doesn´t tell anyone about this love, but in the last stanza we get to see she would like to tell because this secret is "something she can live with".
    Congratulations on your expressiveness.
    The song you added is a new version for me, I knew the original one, which we used to sing with my friends when we were younger. The song was already old-fashioned for us, but still, we liked it a lot.

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