Our assignment was to write a poem based in some poems we have analysed in class. I choose She was a phantom of delight, that is about the loving and admiration of a person.
Seen him everyday
was like waking up for school
Till the day I fell and everything
began to be hard, a little awkward and dark
like a feeling of unhappiness
crying, complaining, thinking.
Now, I see him from another
point of view
clear my ideas of some months not seening
anything and anyone;
When I let my admiration spread in the air,
the routine begins again
and that feeling of letting him go
make my heart wants me to say hello.
Great work Berenice!
ResponderEliminarYour poem is quite mysterious, which is very interesting since the reader keeps on thinking about your words and their meaning.
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